http://ratherastory.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ohsam 2010-03-02 12:51 am (UTC)

Re: Filled: Will You Serve 1/1

Guh.

You need to write more. Clearly.

Sam’s large hand drops to the boy’s head for a moment as he awkwardly climbs the last step and goes by.

That broke me. Oh, Sammy!

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