Really loved these first two chapters. The denial, maybe more because of all the stress he is under and because he doesn't have time to really acknowledge it. And then the first quiet time and the realization hits. The moment of thinking that he isn't really death, until his mind tells him otherwise. And the call for help, the panic and the incredible vulnerability. I really adore this. Hugs, Vonnie
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Date: 2011-01-14 06:54 pm (UTC)