FIC: Oil in the Lungs

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Title: Oil in the Lungs
Chapters: 1/1
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Pairing: Gen
Characters: Sam, Dean, Mary
Rating: T
Word Count: 3697
Spoiler Warning: Set early season 12


Summary: Some say cruelty is an art. Some say it's an accident. Usually, it's both at the same time. Dean thought he wanted this. Dean thought he needed this.

Read here: AO3

Comments

[ewefluffypup.livejournal.com]

Brilliant story!!!

[jpunkin.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! :)

Edition 4,697

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This must be one of the best stories I have ever read 👏, what strikes me the most is how well you write them so much in-character, that is actually sad , because that's exactly what was happening in season 12 and it hurts watching Sam's feelings rejected like that .
But what actually hit the feelings was Dean's POV , that a part of Dean actually acknowledges the problem but in the same time denying it , and he stops himself from feeling hurt for his brother , while Sam is burying the hurt so that Dean can finally reconnect with Mary ! then him comparing the situation to their childhood , " your brother always gets lost in his nonsense " NONSENSE ! , Dean just considred Sam's hopes , Sam's emotions and love nonsense that was just cruel and he knew it , he FELT it .. I FELT IT .. then Dean returns and is kinda heartbroken for Sam , and he is truly trying to comfort him the best he could , because he is still Dean and that's what he does .. even if he was the one doing the hurt , he is always there to comfort .. What away to end the story ! 😭💔❤
And finally , the summary line was great , so accurate , and so fitting ..
I loved this story so much, it touched me , your style is amazing and it added so much depth to what the show offered us , and explored the Winchester relationships in a way we never saw on screen .
So thank you very much for writing this piece if art and sorry for this long comment .

[jpunkin.livejournal.com]

Ahh thank you so much for this amazing comment! Please don't apologize -- this is the best thing :) I'm so glad the fic really resonated with you and brought out those emotions. Thank you for reading!!