Title: And this Great Blue World of Ours (Chapter 10)
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Characters (overall): Dean, Castiel, Sam, plus a number of angels and demons
Rating (overall): NC-17
Warnings (overall): violence, torture, drug use, insanity, mentions of rape
Spoilers: Going AU during episode 5.18: Point of No Return. No spoilers for season six.
Words (this chapter): 10,426
Summary: A man wakes up in a ruined wasteland, without memories, without a name, without knowing the strange guy who claims he used to be an angel, or that he once had a little brother. All he knows is that the world is dying, everyone is lying to him and that somehow, somewhere, something went terribly wrong. Because someone said Yes when they should have said No, and someone else paid the price.
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Throwing a glare at Dean, Cas says, “So you do want to discuss this after all? I’m warning you, mentioning your brother is probably not to be avoided.”
Posted at Dreamwidth due to length. Comment anywhere you like.
Beta:
Characters (overall): Dean, Castiel, Sam, plus a number of angels and demons
Rating (overall): NC-17
Warnings (overall): violence, torture, drug use, insanity, mentions of rape
Spoilers: Going AU during episode 5.18: Point of No Return. No spoilers for season six.
Words (this chapter): 10,426
Summary: A man wakes up in a ruined wasteland, without memories, without a name, without knowing the strange guy who claims he used to be an angel, or that he once had a little brother. All he knows is that the world is dying, everyone is lying to him and that somehow, somewhere, something went terribly wrong. Because someone said Yes when they should have said No, and someone else paid the price.
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Throwing a glare at Dean, Cas says, “So you do want to discuss this after all? I’m warning you, mentioning your brother is probably not to be avoided.”
Posted at Dreamwidth due to length. Comment anywhere you like.
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Date: 2011-08-09 08:39 pm (UTC)I hope things turned out positively for you, too!
Yeah, Cas is pissed. I'd be pissed, too. This Dean has emerged from Season 5!Dean at whom I was pissed a lot. Maybe that's a factor in it...
The countdown has definitely started! I am, in fact, currently writing the final scene of the first part. For you, that's two chapters to go! (The next chapter will have plenty of Sam-hurting, by the way! It's actually the darkest yet.)
I don't dare completely judge the level of faith those villagers have. I don't know them well enough for that. (They came in kind of last second.) But I think you're at least partially right. I'd say, it's some parts selfishness, some parts indoctrination, and the rest is fear. And oh yes, they are definitely creepy!
Jena's return was a long time coming. I'm glad she's back - she's fun to write. Also, the next chapter will tell you what (and probably who) she is.
I have the story roughly thought out, meaning I know some important events in the future and I know how it will end. But a lot of stuff in between is still missing. That's why it's difficult to estimate how long this is going to get.
By the way, the next posted chapter will officially break the 100,000 words mark!